This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
This is one of my favourite sentences from my writing this week
I can smell victory when I got a goal. I can feel the wind WHOOSHING!!! Through my spine. I can hear the people cheering YOU COULD DO IT!! The sound of the people cheering it made me get a goal. CLUTCH CLUTCH!! At the same time I got a goal on the soft grass. BANG BANG while I got two goals.
