When Pohatu class was learning how to speak Korean our best teacher Miss Fortes told us that we were going to eat Korean food on Wednesday. Some of my friends said that they were excited to eat the Korean food. On Wednesday and I was playing around on morning teat but suddenly someone came in a really nice car. When she came into the school she looked like she was the one of the people who was delivering the food to us.
When I went up to the basketball hoop I looked really closely and she was the one who had bought us a lot of Korean food. Miss Fortes chose the people to help her to carry the box of food and they were actually doing fine and excellent. The people who helped was Andrew, Jeremiah, Dani. Amanda, Hinemoa, Genete, Kartia, Haydiya, Aliza, Veronica and Arum.
Showing posts with label Term 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Term 4. Show all posts
Thursday, 9 November 2017
Friday, 27 October 2017
language features
This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
This is one of my favourite sentences from my writing this week
I can smell victory when I got a goal. I can feel the wind WHOOSHING!!! Through my spine. I can hear the people cheering YOU COULD DO IT!! The sound of the people cheering it made me get a goal. CLUTCH CLUTCH!! At the same time I got a goal on the soft grass. BANG BANG while I got two goals.
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